Planet Freedom

http://www.flossman.org/myfuckinggod.rtf

SO I HEARD CHAPTER 1 ON YTMND, AND DID SOME SEARCHING AND FOUND THE WHOLE THING. CHAPTER 1 WAS JUST DOWN RIGHT HILARIOUS, BUT WHAT REALLY MADE ME LAUGH WHEN I FOUND THIS SHIT... 130+ PAGES! THIS IS THE MOST GOD AWFUL THING EVER, SO AWFUL IT GOES AROUND THE SCALE AND LANDS IN EPIC. THIS IS SO HORRIBLE IT'S THE FUNNIEST THING EVER. I'M NOT EVEN KIDDING.

WARNING: EXTREME ADULT MATERIAL, BUT EXTREMELY WRITTEN BY EXTREMELY 13 YEAR OLD GIRL

*Dies*

Pheniox Down, plz?

Sonic was staying over at bunny house for a sleep over, she was his only girl friend for the past five years and it wasn’t just a sleep over as he thought it would be. Bunny invited his over for a master batting evening and he agreed to it. Bunny explained to him that we will be master batting in front of each other and we will be master batting off each other.

Holy shit that was gay

So a girl my age wrote this?! This is like a hellish novel from a mentally insane 30 year old! I could've never made anything like this up but I would have better grammar.

Hoss1993 wrote:So a girl my age wrote this?! This is like a hellish novel from a mentally insane 30 year old! I could've never made anything like this up but I would have better grammar.

I DON'T KNOW THEIR AGE, BUT JUDGING BY THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, I DETERMINED THEY'RE EITHER STUPID OR AROUND 13 (IF THEY'RE TRYING TO WRITE A NOVEL, OR SOMETHING, ANYONE COULD USE BETTER GRAMMAR), AND THE GIRL PART I DETERMINED BY HOW THEY DON'T KNOW HOW PENISES WORK.

I JUST READ THE REVISED CHAPTERS AND DEAR LORD IT GETS GORY AND SICK. BUT STILL PLENTY OF LAUGHABLE CONTENT IF YOU CAN STOMACH AROUND THAT STUFF.

Nuthead wrote:

Hoss1993 wrote:So a girl my age wrote this?! This is like a hellish novel from a mentally insane 30 year old! I could've never made anything like this up but I would have better grammar.

I DON'T KNOW THEIR AGE, BUT JUDGING BY THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, I DETERMINED THEY'RE EITHER STUPID OR AROUND 13 (IF THEY'RE TRYING TO WRITE A NOVEL, OR SOMETHING, ANYONE COULD USE BETTER GRAMMAR), AND THE GIRL PART I DETERMINED BY HOW THEY DON'T KNOW HOW PENISES WORK.

I JUST READ THE REVISED CHAPTERS AND DEAR LORD IT GETS GORY AND SICK. BUT STILL PLENTY OF LAUGHABLE CONTENT IF YOU CAN STOMACH AROUND THAT STUFF.

I'VE BEEN IN THE BOWELS OF HELL (DA) SO I CAN TAKE IT.

ALSO CAPS ARE FUN.

Hoss1993 wrote:

Nuthead wrote:

Hoss1993 wrote:So a girl my age wrote this?! This is like a hellish novel from a mentally insane 30 year old! I could've never made anything like this up but I would have better grammar.

I DON'T KNOW THEIR AGE, BUT JUDGING BY THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, I DETERMINED THEY'RE EITHER STUPID OR AROUND 13 (IF THEY'RE TRYING TO WRITE A NOVEL, OR SOMETHING, ANYONE COULD USE BETTER GRAMMAR), AND THE GIRL PART I DETERMINED BY HOW THEY DON'T KNOW HOW PENISES WORK.

I JUST READ THE REVISED CHAPTERS AND DEAR LORD IT GETS GORY AND SICK. BUT STILL PLENTY OF LAUGHABLE CONTENT IF YOU CAN STOMACH AROUND THAT STUFF.

I'VE BEEN IN THE BOWELS OF HELL (DA) SO I CAN TAKE IT.

ALSO CAPS ARE FUN.

YEAH THEY REALLY ARE. THIS STORY THOUGH... I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE ANYONE COULD WRITE THIS CRAP. THE CONCEPT IS THAT OF A CHILD, BUT THE GORY AND SEX CONTENTS ARE THAT OF A DERANGED 30 YEAR OLD.

Nuthead wrote:

Hoss1993 wrote:So a girl my age wrote this?! This is like a hellish novel from a mentally insane 30 year old! I could've never made anything like this up but I would have better grammar.

I DON'T KNOW THEIR AGE, BUT JUDGING BY THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, I DETERMINED THEY'RE EITHER STUPID OR AROUND 13 (IF THEY'RE TRYING TO WRITE A NOVEL, OR SOMETHING, ANYONE COULD USE BETTER GRAMMAR), AND THE GIRL PART I DETERMINED BY HOW THEY DON'T KNOW HOW PENISES WORK.

I JUST READ THE REVISED CHAPTERS AND DEAR LORD IT GETS GORY AND SICK. BUT STILL PLENTY OF LAUGHABLE CONTENT IF YOU CAN STOMACH AROUND THAT STUFF.

lol penises.

Nuthead wrote:

Hoss1993 wrote:

Nuthead wrote:

Hoss1993 wrote:So a girl my age wrote this?! This is like a hellish novel from a mentally insane 30 year old! I could've never made anything like this up but I would have better grammar.

I DON'T KNOW THEIR AGE, BUT JUDGING BY THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING, I DETERMINED THEY'RE EITHER STUPID OR AROUND 13 (IF THEY'RE TRYING TO WRITE A NOVEL, OR SOMETHING, ANYONE COULD USE BETTER GRAMMAR), AND THE GIRL PART I DETERMINED BY HOW THEY DON'T KNOW HOW PENISES WORK.

I JUST READ THE REVISED CHAPTERS AND DEAR LORD IT GETS GORY AND SICK. BUT STILL PLENTY OF LAUGHABLE CONTENT IF YOU CAN STOMACH AROUND THAT STUFF.

I'VE BEEN IN THE BOWELS OF HELL (DA) SO I CAN TAKE IT.

ALSO CAPS ARE FUN.

YEAH THEY REALLY ARE. THIS STORY THOUGH... I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE ANYONE COULD WRITE THIS CRAP. THE CONCEPT IS THAT OF A CHILD, BUT THE GORY AND SEX CONTENTS ARE THAT OF A DERANGED 30 YEAR OLD.

JUST THINK, THIS WAS WRITTEN BY A HUMAN. IF YOU CAN CALL IT THAT.

UNLESS IT'S A FARM

Part 3 won’t be up till Monday because I’m going to ghost rider tomorrow and having a Trigun marathon this weekend.

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Tails was sitting in his room maturbating while thinking about sonic and his big juicy cock. Just then there a knock on the door and uncle chuck lets himself in. Tails cums right as soon as chuck steps into his room. Tails cums onto chucks face and apologizes for it.

theHappyFungus wrote:Tails was sitting in his room maturbating while thinking about sonic and his big juicy cock. Just then there a knock on the door and uncle chuck lets himself in. Tails cums right as soon as chuck steps into his room. Tails cums onto chucks face and apologizes for it.

TOLD YOU. HOW EPIC IS THIS?

"Uncle chuck troughs the radio back into the ocean because he doesn’t want to hear the straight version of that song. Chuck after hearing that song it made me hornier then ever. I also want to do everything it said in that song says Tails. Those two go back to it and does everything in that song five times over."